Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poetry. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 23, 2025

Urdu: A language beyond religion; a legacy of unity and literary brilliance

 


The recent observation by the Supreme Court of India, calling Urdu the finest specimen of the Ganga-Jamuni tehzeeb, is both timely and necessary. In a country often divided by religious and linguistic identities, such recognition serves as a reminder of Urdu’s intrinsic connection to India’s pluralistic culture and rich history. More than a language, Urdu is a reflection of India’s composite heritage – a beautiful confluence of Persian, Arabic, Turkish, Sanskrit, and local dialects that evolved on Indian soil and flourished as a symbol of syncretism and shared identity.

Urdu’s association with Islam has long clouded its broader cultural significance. But as the apex court rightly pointed out, language is not religion – language is culture. This was clearly visible at two recent literary events held here. The International Mushaira, organized by the Daagh Dehlivi Foundation, Hyderabad, and the 87th death anniversary of the philosopher-poet Allama Iqbal, organized by the Iqbal Academy, were a big hit.

Titled ‘Urdu Hai Jis Ka Naam ..’. the mushaira paid tributes to Daagh, master of romantic and sensuous poems, while the other programme recalled the art and work of Iqbal, poet of the East. At both gatherings, the audience turnout included people from all religions and backgrounds, reinforcing the fact that Urdu is as much a language of Hindus, Sikhs, and Christians as it is of Muslims.

Urdu in the freedom struggle

Urdu played a vital role in India’s freedom movement. It was the language of protest, poetry, and political awakening. Revolutionary slogans such as ‘Inquilab Zindabad’ and ‘Sarfaroshi ki Tamanna’ were popularized in Urdu and resonated with millions. Urdu newspapers and journals like Zamindar and Al-Hilal edited by figures like Maulana Abul Kalam Azad and Maulana Zafar Ali Khan, were instrumental in awakening political consciousness among the masses.

Leaders across the board used Urdu as a means to reach out to the common man. Mahatma Gandhi himself acknowledged the importance of Urdu and supported its use in his publications and speeches. The language acted as a unifying force, transcending regional and religious boundaries to mobilize a collective national identity.

A rich literary legacy

Urdu’s literary heritage is vast and profound. Its poetry, in particular, is known for its depth, elegance, and philosophical richness. From the romantic ghazals of Mir Taqi Mir and Daagh Dehlvi to the revolutionary verses of Faiz Ahmed Faiz and the spiritual philosophy of Allama Iqbal, Urdu poetry touches every aspect of human emotion and societal reality.

Prose in Urdu also boasts remarkable diversity. Writers like Munshi Premchand, who initially wrote in Urdu before switching to Hindi, used the language to portray the struggles of the common man. Saadat Hasan Manto, Ismat Chughtai, and Krishan Chander wrote powerful short stories that challenged societal norms and spoke against communalism and oppression.

Urdu is also the language of cinema, music, and theatre. Bollywood, for decades, has thrived on Urdu’s lyrical charm. Legendary writers/poets like Kaifi Azmi, Sahir Ludhianvi, Javeed Akhtar, and Gulzar have penned some of Indian cinema’s most iconic songs and dialogues in Urdu, proving the language’s emotional and aesthetic appeal.

Hindu writers’ contributions to Urdu

Urdu’s development owes much to the contributions of Hindu writers, poets, and scholars. Pandit Ratan Nath Sarshar, a 19th-century novelist, was one of the pioneers of Urdu fiction. His work, Fasana-e-Azad, is considered a milestone in Urdu literature. Brij Narayan Chakbast, another Hindu poet, wrote patriotic Urdu poetry that inspired countless Indians.

Premchand (born Dhanpat Rai Srivastava), although known today primarily as a Hindi writer, began his literary career in Urdu and is regarded as one of the greatest Urdu short story writers. His Urdu works, like Soz-e-Watan or Sorrow of the Nation, were among the earliest literary responses to British colonial rule.

The tradition continues today, with many contemporary Hindu writers and scholars contributing to Urdu literature, translation, and education. Their efforts help dispel the myth that Urdu belongs to one community and reinforce its role as a shared cultural treasure.

Urdu is a living heritage

Despite its decline in formal education and administration, Urdu remains deeply embedded in India’s cultural fabric. It survives in Bollywood lyrics, TV dramas, Sufi music, and everyday idioms. It continues to thrive in Indian poetry festivals (mushairas), literature festivals, and cultural events.

What is needed now is greater institutional support for Urdu education and the preservation of its literature. Recognition from the judiciary and the enthusiastic response to Urdu literary events are hopeful signs. They show that people are beginning to reclaim Urdu not as a religious symbol but as a part of their cultural identity.

In recognizing Urdu’s place in our collective heritage, we reaffirm our commitment to India’s inclusive ethos. As the lines of Daagh Dehlvi go:

Urdu hai jiska naam, humein jaante hain Daagh

Hindostaan mein dhum hamari zubaan ki hai

Indeed, Urdu is not just a language—it is a symbol of unity, beauty, and the timeless spirit of India.

The verses of modern poet, Iqbal Ashhar, depict the glorious era and present plight of Urdu is telling. Read his couplets:

Urdu hai mera naam main Khusro ki paheli

Main Meer ki humraz hoon, Ghalib ki saheli

(I am Urdu — the riddle once posed by Khusro,

Confidante of Meer, and Ghalib’s cherished shadow)

Kyoon mujhko banate ho ta’assub ka nishana

Maine to kabhi khud ko Musalmaan nahi mana

(Why make me a target of narrow-minded blame

I never confined myself to just a Muslim name)

Dekha tha kabhi maine bhi khushiyon ka zamana

Apne hi watan mein hoon magar aaj akayli

(I, too, once basked in days of celebration,

Now, lonely, I dwell in my nation.)

J.S.Ifthekhar,
Hyderabad based journalist.

Article published in Siasat.com portal.
Dated April 23,2025

Saturday, November 25, 2023

Javeed’s ‘Kamal’: A cultural tribute interrupted by election weary police

 



In the midst of the clamor surrounding elections, Javeed Kamal stood apart, unwavering in his dedication to the promotion of the Urdu language. True to his name, he did a ‘kamal’ and orchestrated a remarkable event that drew together a diverse group of Urdu enthusiasts. Among them were professors, academics, journalists, and poets, converging to reflect on the current state of affairs concerning Urdu.
The occasion that brought these minds together was the joint celebration of the birth anniversaries of three distinguished personalities—Maulana Abul Kalam Azad, India’s first education minister, renowned poet Allama Iqbal, and the valiant Tipu Sultan, who fiercely resisted the advancement of British forces. As disparate as their fields of influence were, a common thread wove through their legacies—their profound love for their community and a deep attachment to the Quran.

The programme was organized by Javeed Kamal’s quarterly journal, Rekhtanama,  and Anjuman Taraqqi Urdu, Hyderabad. Earlier, there was a bit of confusion when police mistook the programme to be an election meeting. The cops marched into the unassuming confines of the Urdu Hall at Himayathnagar and sought clarification from the event organizers about the nature of the gathering. The police officers were visibly relieved when they realized that they had stumbled upon a cultural affair rather than a politically charged meeting. Without a word, they silently withdrew from the auditorium, leaving the Urdu enthusiasts to continue their programme.
Speakers highlighted the indelible mark on India’s intellectual landscape left by Maulana Azad. His commitment to education as a means of societal upliftment mirrored his love for the diverse communities that composed the tapestry of the nation. Azad’s vision transcended political boundaries; he sought to empower the masses through the enlightenment of knowledge.

Allama Iqbal, the celebrated poet-philosopher, contributed significantly to the cultural and intellectual heritage of the Urdu-speaking world. His poetry resonates with profound spirituality, drawing inspiration from the teachings of the Quran. Iqbal envisioned a society where individuals, irrespective of their background, could find unity through a shared appreciation of their spiritual essence, the speakers said.

Tipu Sultan, the valiant warrior, symbolized resistance against colonial forces. His fierce determination to protect his people from British oppression emanated from a sense of duty rooted in his attachment to the Quranic principles of justice and freedom. Tipu Sultan’s legacy echoed the sentiments that love for one’s community could fuel the courage needed to confront formidable challenges.
Javeed Kamal’s initiative to commemorate these three iconic figures served as a poignant reminder of the enduring values that bind the Urdu-speaking community. The gathering provided a platform for introspection, discussion, and a renewed commitment to preserving and promoting the rich cultural and linguistic tapestry that is Urdu.

Students of Central Public School, Khilwat, paid a poignant tribute to Allama Iqbal. Attired in period costumes they recited the timeless verses of Iqbal’s poem, Ya Rab Dile Muslim ko wo zinda tamanna de, in the context of the challenges being  faced by the community.

Several speakers, including Prof. S.A. Shukoor lamented the gradual detachment of Muslims from their own mother tongue. “What will be the future of Urdu after our generation? ”, wondered Prof Amina Teheseen of Moulana Azad National Urdu University.
The programme saw the exceptional contribution of individuals from different walks of life to Urdu being recognised. Mementoes and awards were given away to many an unsung hero. Some of the awardees were: Sufi Sultan Shattari , Tameez Ahmed Perwaz (Allama Iqbal award for poetry), Muhammad Osman Shaheed, Dr. Islamuddin Mujahid (Tipu Sultan award for oratory), Dr. Majid Daagi (Abdul Raheem Khan award  for literature), Maulana Ghyas Ahmed Rashadi (Zaheeruddin Ali Khan award for social work), Mushtaq Ahmad Saharwardi, Dr. Shaikh Zeenat Parveen (Dr. Mumtaz Mehdi award for humour and satire), J.S. Ifthekhar and  M.A. Majid (Maulana Abul Kalam Azad award for journalism).
The programme stood as a testament to the enduring power of language, culture, and shared values in transcending the noise of electoral politics. In celebrating the legacies of Azad, Iqbal, and Tipu, the Urdu enthusiasts not only honored the past but also kindled a flame of inspiration for the future of Urdu language and culture.


In the midst of the clamor surrounding elections, Javeed Kamal stood apart, unwavering in his dedication to the promotion of the Urdu language. True to his name, he did a ‘kamal’ and orchestrated a remarkable event that drew together a diverse group of Urdu enthusiasts. Among them were professors, academics, journalists, and poets, converging to reflect on the current state of affairs concerning Urdu.
The occasion that brought these minds together was the joint celebration of the birth anniversaries of three distinguished personalities—Maulana Abul Kalam Azad, India’s first education minister, renowned poet Allama Iqbal, and the valiant Tipu Sultan, who fiercely resisted the advancement of British forces. As disparate as their fields of influence were, a common thread wove through their legacies—their profound love for their community and a deep attachment to the Quran.

The programme was organized by Javeed Kamal’s quarterly journal, Rekhtanama,  and Anjuman Taraqqi Urdu, Hyderabad. Earlier, there was a bit of confusion when police mistook the programme to be an election meeting. The cops marched into the unassuming confines of the Urdu Hall at Himayathnagar and sought clarification from the event organizers about the nature of the gathering. The police officers were visibly relieved when they realized that they had stumbled upon a cultural affair rather than a politically charged meeting. Without a word, they silently withdrew from the auditorium, leaving the Urdu enthusiasts to continue their programme.
Speakers highlighted the indelible mark on India’s intellectual landscape left by Maulana Azad. His commitment to education as a means of societal upliftment mirrored his love for the diverse communities that composed the tapestry of the nation. Azad’s vision transcended political boundaries; he sought to empower the masses through the enlightenment of knowledge.

Allama Iqbal, the celebrated poet-philosopher, contributed significantly to the cultural and intellectual heritage of the Urdu-speaking world. His poetry resonates with profound spirituality, drawing inspiration from the teachings of the Quran. Iqbal envisioned a society where individuals, irrespective of their background, could find unity through a shared appreciation of their spiritual essence, the speakers said.

Tipu Sultan, the valiant warrior, symbolized resistance against colonial forces. His fierce determination to protect his people from British oppression emanated from a sense of duty rooted in his attachment to the Quranic principles of justice and freedom. Tipu Sultan’s legacy echoed the sentiments that love for one’s community could fuel the courage needed to confront formidable challenges.
Javeed Kamal’s initiative to commemorate these three iconic figures served as a poignant reminder of the enduring values that bind the Urdu-speaking community. The gathering provided a platform for introspection, discussion, and a renewed commitment to preserving and promoting the rich cultural and linguistic tapestry that is Urdu.

Students of Central Public School, Khilwat, paid a poignant tribute to Allama Iqbal. Attired in period costumes they recited the timeless verses of Iqbal’s poem, Ya Rab Dile Muslim ko wo zinda tamanna de, in the context of the challenges being  faced by the community.

Several speakers, including Prof. S.A. Shukoor lamented the gradual detachment of Muslims from their own mother tongue. “What will be the future of Urdu after our generation? ”, wondered Prof Amina Teheseen of Moulana Azad National Urdu University.
The programme saw the exceptional contribution of individuals from different walks of life to Urdu being recognised. Mementoes and awards were given away to many an unsung hero. Some of the awardees were: Sufi Sultan Shattari , Tameez Ahmed Perwaz (Allama Iqbal award for poetry), Muhammad Osman Shaheed, Dr. Islamuddin Mujahid (Tipu Sultan award for oratory), Dr. Majid Daagi (Abdul Raheem Khan award  for literature), Maulana Ghyas Ahmed Rashadi (Zaheeruddin Ali Khan award for social work), Mushtaq Ahmad Saharwardi, Dr. Shaikh Zeenat Parveen (Dr. Mumtaz Mehdi award for humour and satire), J.S. Ifthekhar and  M.A. Majid (Maulana Abul Kalam Azad award for journalism).
The programme stood as a testament to the enduring power of language, culture, and shared values in transcending the noise of electoral politics. In celebrating the legacies of Azad, Iqbal, and Tipu, the Urdu enthusiasts not only honored the past but also kindled a flame of inspiration for the future of Urdu language and culture.
J.S.Ifthekhar,
Hyderabad based journalist.

Article published in Siasat.com portal.
Dated November 25,2023

Thursday, November 23, 2023

Bridging gap between Telugu, Urdu–Murthy Mehak wishes to heal religious and cultural wounds

 


 A glance at the book shows that it is no ordinary compilation of stories. It is a vibrant tapestry woven with threads of cultural understanding. The endeavor emerges not merely as a literary pursuit but as a bridge to connect hearts across religious lines.

As the pages unfold, Guldasta becomes a portal into the intricate tapestry of Hindu life as depicted by Muslim Urdu writers. The stories resonate with the pulse of diverse customs and traditions, transcending the boundaries of religious affiliations. Padullaparthy Venkata Suryanarayana Murthy, who writes under the pen name Mehak Hyderabadi, delicately extracts the essence of these Urdu tales and transplants it into the rich soil of Telugu literature.

The narrative weaves through the trials and tribulations of Hindu society, painting a nuanced portrait that goes beyond stereotypes. Through the lens of these Urdu tales, readers are invited to witness the kaleidoscope of human experiences that bind us together, irrespective of faith.

Murthy’s motivation extends beyond literary exploration; it’s a conscious effort to dispel misgivings and foster mutual understanding. In a world where discord often overshadows harmony, his new book, Guldasta (Bouquet) emerges as a testament to the power of literature in building bridges. The journalist-turned-author has embarked on a journey to dismantle preconceived notions and build a shared narrative.

His proficiency in Urdu allows Murthy to transcend the limitations of literal translation, capturing the soul of the stories and presenting them in the melodic cadence of Telugu. The translated narratives, far from being mere replicas, pulsate with the vitality of the original Urdu tales. The transfer of cultural nuances and emotions remains intact, ensuring that readers traverse the landscapes of these stories with genuine engagement.

Social cohesion in India faces challenges marked by a vertical split along religious lines, particularly between Hindus and Muslims. Language barriers further compound matters. “I want to remove this distrust and dispel preconceived notions through my writings to the extent possible,” says Murthy.

Guldasta becomes a metaphorical offering, a bouquet of stories carefully plucked from the garden of Urdu literature, presented to Telugu readers as a gesture of shared humanity.

A Telugu journalist, Murthy worked for several vernacular newspapers before his retirement. As an empanelled writer with the Sahitya Academy, he plans to translate more books from Urdu to Telugu. But why Urdu? “I love the sweetness of the language”, he says.

Guldasta, his tenth book, is a part of the ambitious project to bring out the best of Hyderabad Urdu short stories in the Telugu language spanning a century – from 1925 to 2025. An arduous task, it took more than three years for Murthy to write the present book after poring over 500 short stories published in 85 years. The book contains 22 stories of 20 well-known Urdu writers, including 8 prominent women writers. Most of them were either associated with the Anjuman Taraqqi Pasand Musannafin or were influenced by its ideology.

The Urdu writers whose stories find mention in Guldasta are: Qamar Jamali, Mahmood Hamid, Najma Nikhat, Ibrahim Shafiq, Jeelani Bano, Awaz Sayeed, Atiq Shah, Baig Ehsas, Farida Zain, Yaseen Ahmad, Kishwar Sultana, Ali Baqar, Sayyada Tayyaba Khusro, Dr. Mohammad Muzaffaruddin Farooqui, Sabir Kosgvi, Kadir Zaman, Bano Tahira Sayeed, Iqbal Mateen, Rasheed Quraishi, and Fatima Taj.

What are these stories about? They delve into societal issues, addressing untouchability, discrimination, gender disparities, and the struggles of women amidst male chauvinism. These stories also shed light on Hindu traditions, cultural nuances, and deep-rooted customs – offering a poignant exploration of beliefs. Through diverse narratives, these tales navigate the intricate fabric of society, unraveling the complexities of both its injustices and traditions. Some of the stories also revisit mythological narratives.

Currently, he is working on two collections of stories written by renowned Marathi Dalit writer and social reformer, Annabhau Sathe, from Hindi. He is also working on the Urdu translation projects of Baig Ehsas’s anthology ‘Dakhma’ and Husain-ul-Haque’s novel Amawas Mein Khwaab assigned by Central Sahitya Academy.

In a society where divisive narratives often dominate headlines, Murthy’s Guldasta stands as a beacon of harmony and understanding. Through his tenacious efforts, he transforms literature into a catalyst for unity, proving that the pen, when wielded with purpose, can be a powerful instrument of change.

J.S.Ifthekhar,
Hyderabad based journalist.

Article published in Siasat.com portal.
Dated November 23,2023

Sunday, October 22, 2023

Imran Pratapgarhi uses Iqbal’s ‘Lab pe aati hai dua…’ to portray plight of Palestinians

 


As the Israel-Palestine war rages on,  poet, Imran Pratapgarhi, comes out firing on all cylinders.  And he does it with the only weapon at his disposal- lyrical prowess. He succeeds in igniting emotions with his poignant and moving verses. His new nazm mirrors the pain and suffering of Palestinians like nothing else.

The renowned bard known for his protest poetry paints a vivid picture of the suffering and anguish being experienced by the Palestinian people, drawing a somber parallel to the iconic poem Lab pe aati hai dua by Allama Iqbal.

As the world is shocked by the relentless turmoil in Palestine, Imran Pratapgarhi takes up the pen to channel the collective pain and torment of the Palestinians. His latest nazm is a haunting testament to the enduring struggle for justice and freedom in the embattled region

The poem, inspired by the timeless work of Allama Iqbal, rekindles memories of Lab pe aati hai dua, which has resonated with generations of poetry enthusiasts. However, Pratapgarhi’s composition breathes new life into this revered tradition of Urdu poetry by addressing the contemporary Palestinian predicament. Sample the verse:


Lab pe aati hai dua bun ke tamanna meri

Sun le tu aaj ye fariyad Khudaya meri


Tere mehboob ne jis simit kiye the sajde

Hukum se tere wo ashabe Nabi ke sajde

Sainkadon gham lye seene main hai ghamgeen khada

Ab faqat tere sahaare hai Falasteen khada

Kash duniya samajh pati ye jhagda kya hai

Aap ke ghar pe kisi ghair ka khabza kya hai

Tu jo chahe to har ek baat ko bahtar karde

Ek nazar daal ke halaat ko bahtar kar de

Imran Pratapgarhi’s words serve as a stark reminder that the issues of the past still linger in the present. His poem seeks to shed light on the illegal occupation of the Palestine land and the painful reality of life in the conflict-ridden region. Through his touching verses, he unfurls a tapestry of human suffering, resilience, and hope in the face of adversity.

The last stanza of the poem takes the breath away and moves one to tears. In a throwback to the Quranic story of Ashabe Feel (105th chapter) when Allah destroyed the army of pagans which came riding on elephants to raze down the Ka’ba. But the King Abraha army was destroyed by the huge flocks of Ababeel ( Common Swift bird) sent by Allah which dropped tiny stones of baked clay over elephants. See how Imran Pratapgarhi uses the historical event to plead the cause of Palestine. He says:


Doodh-mohe bachon ke bhi khwab huva Karte hain

Jung karne ke bhi aadab huva karte hain

Hum nahin kehte hamein koee paiyamber dey dey

Tere hi aage jo jhuke hum ko sar de de

Lashkare feel jahalat pe utar aaya hai

Aye Khuda phir se ababilon ko kankar de de

Kaun kehta hai nafrat se chalegi duniya

Tu dikha de ke mohabbat se chalegi duniya

What stands out in the whole nazm is the poetic genius of Imran Pratapgarhi and his ability to capture the raw emotions of the Palestinian struggle along with the depth of their aspirations. His words bridge geographical and cultural gaps, connecting people from all walks of life with the shared yearning for peace and justice.

In a world where the Palestinian-Israeli conflict continues to be a subject of debate, Imran Pratapgarhi’s new composition transcends boundaries and resonates with the hearts of those who yearn for an end to the suffering of the Palestinian people. Moreover his poem serves as a poignant reminder of the power of poetry to transcend borders and touch the core of our collective humanity, offering solace and solidarity to those whose lives have been forever altered by the tumultuous events in the region.


J.S.Ifthekhar,
Hyderabad based journalist.

Article published in Siasat.com portal.
Dated October 22,2023

Thursday, October 12, 2023

Shahmiri’s imagist poetry: A soul-stirring journey through words

 


 In the realm of literature, the power of words is undeniable. They can create, inspire, console, and incite. What matters is how one wields them. In the hands of an expert poet words can become a soothing balm or a sharp blade.

Prof Muzaffar Ali Shahmiri, however, chooses to differ. He uses the power of words not to make or mar, heal, or hurt but to awaken the depths of human consciousness. He skillfully sifts the chaff of obfuscation through his linguistic prowess to reveal the kernel of truth.

The other day he cast a spell on the audience through his imagistic poetry. He left the circle of Urdu aficionados, who gathered at Lamakaan for the Bazm-e-Sukhan session, bemused and shell-shocked with his typically short free verse poems. No, there is no talk of gul-o-bulbul, saqi-o-maikhana or passion for lovelorn in his poems.  Breaking away from the rules of bahr (meter), matla and maqta (the first and last sher), Shamiri’s poetry takes on a whole new format. He doesn’t beat about the bush but comes to the subject directly. The words are succinct and to the point – evoking concrete images.

Sample this poem:


Jub tumhari nazr

Rangon mein farq karna bhool jaye

Aur jub wo

Har rang  mein

Ek hi rang dhoondne lag jaye

To samajh lena ke

Duniya ko be-rang hone mein

Ab ziada der nahin lage gi

One can draw any inference from this poem. It can be about the state of affairs in the present regime or any other thing.  Shahmiri leaves it to the reader’s imagination

A former Vice-Chancellor of Dr. Abdul Haq University in Rayalaseema, Shahmiri is now dishing out poetry enriched with vivid imagery and raw emotion, a testament to the transformative potential of the Urdu language. His verses are laden with pain, anguish, and suffering, yet they speak in a voice that is uniquely powerful and poignant. The wordsmith meticulously chooses each word to convey the depths of human emotion, making his poetry a cathartic experience for readers.

“I can write poetry only this way. I can never think in words but only in images,” says Shahmiri, who is influenced by American poets, Ezra Weston Loomis Pound and Hilda Doolittle. For the last four decades, he has been writing imagist poetry which he calls in Urdu ‘Paikari Nazm’ packing complex emotions into concise verses. Brevity is the soul of wit. And sure enough one can find the economy of words in his poems – which are both refreshing and impactful. For instance, he translated Ezra Pound’s famous poem ‘In a Station of the Metro’ in just 12 words, two less than the words used by the legendary poet.

Are such poems never written in Urdu? Yes, they are. But they are written under ‘Nasri Nazm’ (prose-poem) category. Shahmiri wants such poems to be separated and given a new identity since imagist poetry is distinguished by concrete words, concrete images, and clear-cut ideas. There are no metaphors or similes here – only images to evoke sensory perceptions. Read this poem which is a good commentary on the present times.

Tum agar apne desh ko

Peechey lejana chahte ho to lejao

Tumhari marzi

Magar itna yaad rakho

Ke peachy-peechey jate jate

Itne peeche na chale jana ke

Pathar ka zamana aajaye

This short poem like many of his other verses evokes a wealth of feelings. The reader is left to ponder and reflect on the essence of the human condition.  Shahmiri makes a telling commentary about the insensitivity of the powers-that-be in this poem – Aur More Nachta Raha (And the peacock kept dancing). Sample some lines:

Saari zamin dal-dal ho rahi thi

Aur more nachta raha

Shab-o-roz bijlian

Zamin mein dhans rahi thi

Aur more nachta raha

Zaherli hava mein

Insan hava ko tarasta raha

Aur more nachta raha

Hatta ke uski apni zamin bhi

Khisakti rahi

Aur more nachta raha

What distinguishes Shahmiri’s poetry is its directness. There are no convoluted metaphors or obscure allusions; his words pierce through the heart with the precision of a surgeon’s scalpel. In a world inundated with complexities and obscurities, his straightforward approach is like a breath of fresh air. His poetry is a lifeline for those seeking solace and understanding.

Prof. Shahmiri’s forthcoming book ‘Paikarah,’ is full of imagist poetry. This collection is a treasure trove of emotions conveyed through the prism of vivid and precise language. Usually a book is first published, reviewed and then presented to public. But Shahmiri has chosen the other way round. He presented a select few poems from his yet-to-be-published work and sought to know the people’s reactions. The book promises to be a poignant exploration of life’s complexities.

The rhythm and flow of words contribute to the effectiveness of his poetry. Shahmiri’s verses have an almost musical quality that resonates with readers on a visceral level. They invite them to embark on a journey through the labyrinth of human emotions..

J.S.Ifthekhar,
Hyderabad based journalist.

Article published in Siasat.com portal.
Dated October 12,2023

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